Adnan

Posted on November 10, 2016 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Adnan

  1. mamum1 says:
    November 16, 2016 at 1:59 pm

    nic expanded nouns and ajectives

  2. lemfe says:
    November 16, 2016 at 2:07 pm

    Nice work Adnan I like it how you use ellipses keep on with the good work

  3. omars says:
    November 16, 2016 at 2:16 pm

    i liked the way you described the characters feelings

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