Ivan journey maxwell

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5 Responses to Ivan journey maxwell

  1. chout says:

    You have done a good piece of writing

  2. osmae says:

    I like how you have used time conectives.

  3. lemfe says:

    Maxwell nice work i like the adjective you use Nice work

  4. omars says:

    I liked how you used acton motive and feeling and also i liked the frunted adverbials

  5. mann says:

    I like that you have used lots of time connectives!

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